Post by nara on Oct 23, 2008 18:33:05 GMT -5
NAME:Darkpaw
GENDER:Tom
APPEARANCE:A standard black British Bombay with a white front left paw and a unusually smooth pelt. His eyes are a cool refreshing blue, with his ears being shorter and eyes being more slanted, giving him an agitated look most of the time despite his calm, peaceful demeanor. His claws are much shorter than average, making it harder for him to fight, though his fangs are surprisingly long and sharp. He has his brother, Adderpelt, trim his whiskers every moon to keep them nice and short and stay out of his way when working, aswell as walking with a small limp.
[short] PERSONALITY:Some could say he's a mix of Yellowfang and Cinderpelt, How thats possible, I dont know, but he is, he's hard on cats who get injured stupidly like he was, yet caring to those who have life threatening injuries that aren't self inflicted or because of stupid stunts, which is still admonishes them. He's also very fond of his brother, Adderpelt, aswell as resentlyful as a old wound to his leg which he doesn't talk about prevents him from being a warrior.
[short] HISTORY:Darkpaws family currently consists of his brother Adderpelt, who he bears a small grudge against because he was able to become a warrior while darkpaw had to discontinue his apprentiship because of a stupid incident while hunting where he didn't adjust properly for a landing and sprained his white paw, in a injury that would later be reported as one causing permanent damage to his leg, making it impossible for him to become an effective warrior, which he always aspired to be. After succesfuly adminitiring first aid which saved the wound from being much worse, he decided if he couldn't be a warrior he'd atleast become the medicine cat apprentice to help out the clan.
SAMPLE POST:
Adderpaw and his brother, Darkpaw, stalked through the forest during their hunting rounds, both determined to atleast match the other in kills, if not besting them. Darkpaw followed a path he knew well, one that let him attack prey more with his fangs than his claws, which were too short to be of any use except pinning. He was just burying his second mouse when he saw a snake move behind his brother, where he instantly ran towards the two, jumping off a stump to get leverage on the snake, sinking his fangs into its neck but landing with a pit underneath his Front left paw, wrenching it badly in the process.
Several hours later, considering how far out they were from camp, Adderpaw helped a limping Darkpaw into camp and towards the medicine cats den, only to find Ash*insert suffix here* asleep, and so, not wanting to bother her, Ashpaw told his brother to get him some poppyseeds and a small bit of cobweb to stem the bleeding, as he'd seen ash*insert suffix here* do for countless other woundsm for the night untill they could talk to Ash*insert suffix here* later that to make sure nothing was missed. After laying down to rest, Darkpaw so as not to strain his foot, and Adderpaw to keep his brother company and to help take his mind off the pain Darkpaw mused over the thought of becoming medicine cat apprentice, since he doubted he would make it to warrior any time anymore.
there is is, I hope its not too bad and that I get accepted
GENDER:Tom
APPEARANCE:A standard black British Bombay with a white front left paw and a unusually smooth pelt. His eyes are a cool refreshing blue, with his ears being shorter and eyes being more slanted, giving him an agitated look most of the time despite his calm, peaceful demeanor. His claws are much shorter than average, making it harder for him to fight, though his fangs are surprisingly long and sharp. He has his brother, Adderpelt, trim his whiskers every moon to keep them nice and short and stay out of his way when working, aswell as walking with a small limp.
[short] PERSONALITY:Some could say he's a mix of Yellowfang and Cinderpelt, How thats possible, I dont know, but he is, he's hard on cats who get injured stupidly like he was, yet caring to those who have life threatening injuries that aren't self inflicted or because of stupid stunts, which is still admonishes them. He's also very fond of his brother, Adderpelt, aswell as resentlyful as a old wound to his leg which he doesn't talk about prevents him from being a warrior.
[short] HISTORY:Darkpaws family currently consists of his brother Adderpelt, who he bears a small grudge against because he was able to become a warrior while darkpaw had to discontinue his apprentiship because of a stupid incident while hunting where he didn't adjust properly for a landing and sprained his white paw, in a injury that would later be reported as one causing permanent damage to his leg, making it impossible for him to become an effective warrior, which he always aspired to be. After succesfuly adminitiring first aid which saved the wound from being much worse, he decided if he couldn't be a warrior he'd atleast become the medicine cat apprentice to help out the clan.
SAMPLE POST:
Adderpaw and his brother, Darkpaw, stalked through the forest during their hunting rounds, both determined to atleast match the other in kills, if not besting them. Darkpaw followed a path he knew well, one that let him attack prey more with his fangs than his claws, which were too short to be of any use except pinning. He was just burying his second mouse when he saw a snake move behind his brother, where he instantly ran towards the two, jumping off a stump to get leverage on the snake, sinking his fangs into its neck but landing with a pit underneath his Front left paw, wrenching it badly in the process.
Several hours later, considering how far out they were from camp, Adderpaw helped a limping Darkpaw into camp and towards the medicine cats den, only to find Ash*insert suffix here* asleep, and so, not wanting to bother her, Ashpaw told his brother to get him some poppyseeds and a small bit of cobweb to stem the bleeding, as he'd seen ash*insert suffix here* do for countless other woundsm for the night untill they could talk to Ash*insert suffix here* later that to make sure nothing was missed. After laying down to rest, Darkpaw so as not to strain his foot, and Adderpaw to keep his brother company and to help take his mind off the pain Darkpaw mused over the thought of becoming medicine cat apprentice, since he doubted he would make it to warrior any time anymore.
there is is, I hope its not too bad and that I get accepted
